I am a year 8 learner at Saint Pius X Catholic School, Auckland, New Zealand. I am at the SPX Nu'u Learning Space and my teacher is Mrs Tui and Mrs Lauchlan.
Hi Ewan,i really enjoyed reading your piece of writing, another thing is that i like how you have explained everything with interesting vocabulary. Fantastic Work!!
Kia Ora Ewan! My name is Kyra and I am a year 7 student in Totara 3 at Grey Main School. I like your post about your writing because you used some very accurate words to describe the bears.
We also do a lot of writing in class. From things like writing blog post, blog comments and of course story's and reports.
This is an extremely cool and creative piece of writing and I can't think of anything you need to work on.
Hi Ewan,i really enjoyed reading your piece of writing, another thing is that i like how you have explained everything with interesting vocabulary. Fantastic Work!!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Ewan! My name is Kyra and I am a year 7 student in Totara 3 at Grey Main School. I like your post about your writing because you used some very accurate words to describe the bears.
ReplyDeleteWe also do a lot of writing in class. From things like writing blog post, blog comments and of course story's and reports.
This is an extremely cool and creative piece of writing and I can't think of anything you need to work on.
See you around your blog!
Kyra