I am a year 8 learner at Saint Pius X Catholic School, Auckland, New Zealand. I am at the SPX Nu'u Learning Space and my teacher is Mrs Tui and Mrs Lauchlan.
Thursday, October 18, 2018
Your true pet?
This week I reconfirmed myself on the structure of explanation writings:
This is my writing on what pet I would like to own, Wednesday the 17th of October
I agree with you owning a pet fox and their laugh is cute.
ReplyDeleteI would like to own a dog because they are very protective and is a very good playmate.
Keep it up!!!
Hi Ewan,
ReplyDeleteI would like to own a dog because it protects home when we a gone somewhere.
Keep it up the good work!!!
Hey Ewan,
ReplyDeleteIf I could own a pet it would be a dog because they are great company to human beings.Keep it up.
Hey Ewan,
ReplyDeleteI would love to have a fox to I like how you set your writing out keep the good work up, I think you can improve by making your writing fit
Hi Ewan,
ReplyDeleteI would like to have a Dog because they are very playful and they are good for protecting homes.
Good piece of writing!
Hey Ewan,
ReplyDeleteYou are true owning a pet fox. If I could own a pet it would be a dog because they are very good playmates and they are very protective.